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Literature Text
Love walks in,
My heart skips a beat.
You really got me
Hooked on a feeling.
You're nobody,
'til somebody loves you
Little things,
Nothing else matters.
Lips of an angel,
Beat of your heart.
Warmness of the soul,
Need you now.
Fluff.
Angel,
Who are you?
Heaven,
Ain't no mountain high enough.
Never say goodbye,
See you again.
My heart skips a beat.
You really got me
Hooked on a feeling.
You're nobody,
'til somebody loves you
Little things,
Nothing else matters.
Lips of an angel,
Beat of your heart.
Warmness of the soul,
Need you now.
Fluff.
Angel,
Who are you?
Heaven,
Ain't no mountain high enough.
Never say goodbye,
See you again.
So, I tried something new and wrote this using only song titles! It tells a love story, and every line does mean something to the story in some way or another, so let me know what you think! I realize it doesn't flow as well as it probably could, but I actually really kinda like it 
Even though it sounds like that slam poetry thing Schmidt did in 22 Jump Street
Even though it sounds like that slam poetry thing Schmidt did in 22 Jump Street
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I did feel that it didn't flow that well, but I really think that given that it is made of titles, it does flow well enough! I get the story, I get the idea well. What I would have liked is a little extra punch in the end but with the method of composing it, I'd say that would be very hard. Quite well done!